Hey guys! Bring this to 5/5 !!!
Hey guys! Bring this to 5/5 !!!
Nice chill, have some changes will be perfect!
Are you sure that it is you who made it?
I can say that this is your best song yet, the melody is wonderful, slightly dark and slightly sad. Overall, this song is filled with sadness and a dim light of joy. The only two things that can be improved is that you can turn down the volume of the percussion that starts at 0:11 and that you can add some strings or pads into the song to give it more emotion or complexity. Hey good job GG
Sidenote: I suggest you to make more tracks like this, and when you get better, return to dubstep because I noticed that you are better with melody than dubstep drops ^_^
This sounds exactly like a dubstep in the 90s. And we dont want that, the melody is a bit too repetitve, try to diversify it. And remember, melody+noise isnt a drop, a drop is an alternence of melody and wub/growls, you cant fill every place with noise and melody, because one can disturb another. If the wub disturbs the melody or vice versa, try to separate them. Sidenote: you are improving
This is better than Earthsplitter and Supernova, but Ichor is always the best!
This should be used in a movie trailer
This is much better than your first song! Wow, the melody is very beautiful and the rhythm is very well mastered! The only thing that dosent quite work is the noises in the drop, I know that dubstep has these wubs, but the wubs arent the main part of the drop (except for some particular songs). Dont fit every space with wubs, that wont sound good, just fill where you need. Also the song needs more mastering but mastering often comes with experience.
PS: How old are you? I am 14
I'm 13 :D
Um ok, first of all, a dubstep track is never shorter than 2min, and the tempo is a lot faster then 140 bpm. The rhythm is good, very bouncy and hype, but the melody is detuned and too simple, no changes in the notes. If this had a slower tempo, longer and the melody is more complex, it would be a lot better. But don't worry, I know that it is your first submission and you will improve from now on!
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